Abstrack's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[1000 KinghtMares]

Did you mean "KnightMares" instead of "KinghtMares"? (notice the swap of the letters "i" and "n")

SlaughterClub responds:

its the same spelling .. ?

[Slow Burner]

This reminds me of The Glitch Mob. Well done! :)

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thank you. : )

[Space Potato]

M hm, I can clearly hear and see the space potatoe passing over me while I'm listening at this. Thanks for pointing it out.

[Minty - Mind Breaker]

I don't hear this quality frequently on NG! Real freakin' good stuff.

The last drop was insane (wasn't expecting the "f*ck!" sample and what came next xD).

[raser - ​tired]

I know this isn't my business, but I can't help it: I think you shouldn't say "not a nice one" as the first thing people will read. As a listener, I tend to expect the song to be of low quality when I see that in the description. I should not be the only one with this impression (and generally, the expectations of people are their reality :P).

By the way, the same structure appears to be used in this song and the previous one you posted. This is simply a suggestion: you could try to use unorthodox structures. Under certain circumstances, it might even be a necessary evil >:D (I'm speculating here)

OfficialRaser responds:

thx 4 feed back bro it's really help me

[raser - deep sleep]

Constructive:
The whole song is a bit repetitive. I was expecting something new through the first drop, and halving the speed by a factor of 2 might have worked perfectly if the melody was different in the drop. The melody is good, but it might not change enough through the song.

Also, I think you overused distortion on the drum in both drops. I think you should consider lowering the power a little bit.

Positive:
Otherwise, I like the design of the drop. Mixing is acceptable (this can always be improved!), and the white-noise after the drops sounds perfect to my ears. I believe the use of a new instrument for the half-speed melody (2:14.05 to 3:18.05) to be a good choice (is it violin?).

[Life (sample)]

This has already been made. See: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/4%E2%80%B233%E2%80%B3

Okay, it's not the same length. Good point.

[to be frank]

Great use of reverb. I think it lacks a bit of melody at the end.

NinjaOnShrooms responds:

Thanks, a fair criticism, I was just staring at it for 30 minutes with no new changes, so I exported and moved on

[Midnight]

Really great composition! I enjoyed it all.

The background instrument that starts at around 0:29 and that ends at 00:56 might lack a small bit of reverb. More precisely, I think it would make the whole section emotionally deeper if you let the reverb last a little longer on each note. Next, at 02:34, the pace of change in the volume of the main instrument might be a bit too abrupt.

While maybe from 00:00 to 01:52 the mood doesn't change enough to me, as a whole, I think it's pretty much complete. I'm allowing myself to point at some stuff that could have been adjusted better *in my opinion*, but in the end this was interesting.

Keep it up dude :)

Chliz responds:

thanks dud

[Dreaming (ft. Luka)]

It's always funny to hear a vocaloid sing in English.

I'm not sure how this can belong to the genre of Dubstep: it feels more like Dance to me.

LightSonicOfficial responds:

well... it's melodic dubstep, and the tempo is 150bpm... so..